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A deep breath
gasping for air
the mistake I made
cannot be undone
I must sit here
she's right next to me
watching with a ghostly gaze
stary eyes and white hair
how much I loved her
I'd told her I'd give my life for her
and yet I thought I wouldn't have to
It was a promise
no one knows where we are
for we are lost in the eternal dark

The wind in our hair
fingers intertwined
We loved each other
deeply
It's the end
our feet on the edge of the bridge
cold metal on our bare feet
cuts and scares from razorblades
that cut in our pale skin
we smiled
It's the end for us
we kissed a deep kiss
her soft lips on mine
then without any last thoughts we jumped
jumped
  jumped
         jumped
                                   In the deep
                                      dark
                                   water
We hit the surface
we realized our mistake
gasping for air
drowning in the water
we held each other
tightly
our mistake flooding our lungs
DROWNING echoed in my head
It was my last breath
Life flashed before my eyes
Kiko and I sat
waiting for someone to find us
in eternal dark    
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Eh just some vent poetry, reminder, don't do suicide, nothing good comes out of it
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:icontitan29dx2:
This....honestly did make me feel better.....but my suicidal thoughts are still in my head....*cries* please.....someone help me.....
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~Miyokothefox Aug 20, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
go eat a candy bar
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:icontitan29dx2:
maybe.....i'll try to.....take a shower....
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~Miyokothefox Aug 20, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Don't take a knife in the shower or try to drown yourself >>
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:icontitan29dx2:
I won't.....but....I am calming down.....I still won't be able to return to DA ever again....
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~Miyokothefox Aug 20, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
good
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=AngelaLeonetti Jul 18, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
Wow
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~Miyokothefox Jul 18, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
oh thx
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